*IMPORTANT NOTE*

You cannot have your cat suspect what Lightenedcall is up to. Only Fellstar, Wandernight and their kits know her true nature, or her plan. All other cats may not be fond of her, but they cannot suspect that she is crazy, or framing Wandernight, or be worried about her sanity, all they think is that she is grieving for her lost kit, and that she is just another clanmate, nothing to be worried about.

Please do not make your cat assume otherwise, I know it is hard not to, but it is extremely important to the storyline, Thank-you
~-~Em~-~

Also, all comments that are like this ^^ shall be deleted.
:~~Dream:



Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Moving On

Ebonypaw struggled to stand. She was getting stronger everyday, and though she couldn't use her back leg, she fought to get better.

Wandernight watched Ebonypaw struggling to walk, she still wanted so desperately to be a warrior. But how could she? How could she fight? She looked at Ivorypaw. Ivorypaw too would have trouble fighting. Even hunting and running. She sighed, and Fellstar came to stand next to her.

"How are they going to be warriors? They can get warrior names, but they can't help the clan."

Fellstar shook his head.

"Special training. I won't be able to help Ebonypaw train now. She needs a warrior that can see. Bayfrost can still train Ivorypaw. She's far behind in her training, since she was missing for many moons, and when she got hurt they were only half way through. Ebonypaw was going to get her name, but now she needs to retrain. It's almost as if both of them need to start from the beginning again. They can't use the same hunting techniques, or fighting techniques. We need to make up new attacks for them. They both can't climb any more, which is a main skill of JayClan. Ivorypaw can still jump to catch birds. But Ebonypaw won't be able to. She may still be able to climb, but it's hard to say at this point. We'll jsut have to make stuff up as we go."

Wandernight nodded.

"Who could be Ebonypaw's new mentor?"

Fellstar thought for a moment.

"Maybe Fringeblade. He may be fierce and ambitious, but he may be able to teach her with Bayfrost there with Ivorypaw. He's our head warrior and he hasn't had an apprentice yet. And I'll still help occasionally."

Wandernight stood up stretching.

"As long as they train together, then fine."

She padded away, her heard low.

::---::

Ebonypaw itched to get out of camp. What happened to Finnick? Was he okay? Questions went through her head, and all she wanted to do was see him. But she could barely walk alone, and her parents were always watching her. She scowled under her breath, and closed her eyes, trying to imagine his scent.

She also wanted to start training again. She wanted to prove that she still could become the warrior she should have.



Wednesday, September 28, 2011

And The Second Falls

Ebonypaw smiled, though her heart ached. Today she would become a warrior! She wondered what her name would be. Maybe Ebonyfall, or Ebonybreeze. She shook with excitement as she padded into the forest. She wanted to hunt one last time as an apprentice.

She sniffed the air, thinking about Ivorypaw. She should have been here to become a warrior too, but there had still been no sign of Ivorypaw since Lightenedcall had attacked her. After they confronted the cold she-cat, Lightenedcall had minded her own business, staying out of the way. It bothered Ebonypaw and her parents, but they could do nothing about it. She heard a thump beside her, and flicked her ears, turning her head. She purred.

"Finnick."

She almost breathed his name, not daring to say it louder. The tom smiled.

"So today you're becoming a warrior?"

Ebonypaw ducked her head shyly.

"Yes. It's taken me longer because I'm blind. But finally, I can be a warrior."

Finnick smiled.

"I'm happy for you."

Ebonypaw smiled mischievously.

"Not for us? I can come out of the camp freely when I'm a warrior."

She butted him lightly with her head, and he purred. She rolled her eyes.

"Come on! I want to hunt. Stay out of sight, in case anyone comes."

He nodded, and leaped back into the trees. Ebonypaw sniffed the air again, though she was slightly distracted by Finnick's scent. She finally smelled a robin by river. She crouched down low, weaving herself among the trees and underbrush carefully, using her other heightened senses to guide her. She pounced, and there was a cut of chirp as she quickly killed the robin. She smiled, and padded to the side of the river to wash the scent off her mouth. She felt someone grab her scruff harshly. She gasped as she was yanked backwards, her air cut off. She was thrown across the pebbly surface, scraping her skin. She struggled to her feet when she heard a hiss. Claws raked across her face, and Lightenedcall's damp scent hit her. She must have been hiding in the river! Ebonypaw struggled to regain her senses, but Lightenedcall kept clubbing her ears, making her dizzy. Ebonypaw backed up, disoriented. She could almost hear Lightenedcall's gloating sneer.

"Now you'll die, like your sister and brothers."

Ebonypaw shook her head, and tried to run, but Lightenedcall was too fast. The she-cat grabbed Ebonypaw's scruff and threw her. Ebonypaw was small for her age, thus easier to lift. Ebonypaw yowled soundlessly as something clamped onto her back leg. She thrashed, scratching at the trap. The trap tightened every time she moved, and she couldn't feel her leg. Lightenedcall growled, and slashed at Ebonypaw again. She white she-cat put her paw over Ebonypaw's throat, pinning her down. The apprentice gasped for air, her sightless eyes wide in terror. Lightenedcall smirked, wanting it to be a slow, painful death.

Before she knew what was happening, she felt a weight hit her side. As Lightenedcall was thrown off, Ebonypaw gasped for her to fill her strangled lungs. She flashed between consciousness and unconsciousness. But she heard the deep hisses of another cat. Finnick.

Finnick lashed out at Lightenedcall. She was stunned for a moment as the unknown cat attacked her. His green eyes were dark with fury, and he attacked savagely. Lightenedcall quickly regained herself and leaped at Finnick's throat. he sidestepped, scraping his claws across her side. He was trained in the arts of battle. His group had studied the clans, learning their moves. They then learned how to avoid those moves and use them as their own. They were trained to kill. To kill the clan cats. Finnick snarled, his voice unknown to Ebonypaw.

"How dare you lay a claw on her! I should kill you! But no. It would be more painful for me to haunt you for the rest of your life. I'd watch your back when you're alone."

Finnick snarled, biting deep into Lightenedcall's shoulder. She slashed back, scoring deep scars onto his neck. But she knew she wouldn't win this battle today, so she ran. Finnick breathed heavily, his eyes clearing up again. He looked at Ebonypaw, she was very still. He ran to her, looking at her face. Her eyes opened and closed every few seconds. The trap was deeply embedded into her leg, but he knew how to get out of traps. He looked around, then quickly dug up the stake that held her. He heard her breathe a small sigh of relief as the pressure left her leg. She was still in deep pain though, from the trap and the wounds Lightenedcall inflicted on her. he buried his head into her neck.

"Don't worry. Just... don't die. I'll get you help."

He shook as panic started to overcome him. She had lost a great deal of blood, and he needed to get her back to her clan as soon as possible. He grabbed her gently by the scruff, and tried to drag her as carefully as possible to the camp. He laid her down outside the entrance, hesitating. Should he show himself? No. He couldn't let them know who he was. He licked Ebonypaw's cheek, then yowled. Finnick then quickly ran up a nearby tree. he climbed as high as he could, but with still being able to see what was happening, without being seen himself.

Finnick saw the leader, Fellstar run out of the camp. The scent of blood and his yowl would have alarmed them. Fellstar stopped dead. He knew that scent that was mixed with the blood.

"Ebonypaw!"

He nuzzled his daughter, who was breathing ever so slightly. He grabbed her scruff and hurried into the camp. Wandernight stood nearby, her eyes overcome with sorrow. She couldn't move. Her only daughter had been taken straight to the medicine cat den. Why didn't she go in? Wandernight would never know why. She saw Fellstar walk out, though he couldn't see their daughter's wounds, he knew just as much as everyone else that they were bad. He padded to Wandernight, using her fear scent to guide him. He nuzzled her.

"They'll do everything they can to save her. It's her leg that they are worried about the most..."

Wandernight shook her head, and finally the sorrow hit her. She wept mournfully. Did her life have to be filled with so much pain?

"W-what happened?"

Fellstar shook his head.

"It looks like she was caught in a trap, though there are claw marks on her..."

Wandernight shuddered, and one name entered her mind. Lightenedcall.

Finnick watched and waited. He left the tree only to eat and drink, other then that he sat guard over the camp. He watched as the clan mourned together, but still continued with life. Fellstar and Wandernight sat in a shadowed spot together, waiting. A little while later, he saw Lightenedcall pad into the camp, her mouth full with prey. She had cleverly washed the blood off her, and parted her fur delicately over the claw marks. He bared his teeth. This cat had to be killed, or punished severely... He shook his head, and continued to watch. I'll fight for you Ebonypaw. I will.





Sunday, August 28, 2011

Grief

Fellstar woke with a start, his throat still choked from loosing Ivorypaw so long ago. Things weren't fair, Lightenedcall had killed two of his kits and Ebonypaw was next, and yet, the clan would have a fit if he banished her, and he knew, that even if she was banished that it would not stop her from coming after Ebonypaw. Life wasn't fair. Wandernight had already lost so much, and poor Ebonypaw was marked for death. Even when he was a kit and his parents had found out he was blind. The day Quailstar told him he could never be a warrior. He had never felt to helpless... so small.

Something had to be done. But nothing could be done. Nothing. At. All. His children, the kits he had brought into this world were dying slowly, painfully, and he could do nothing. His mate had to suffer each of their deaths. Why had he done this. He knew Something wasn't right with Lightenedcall, he should have just stayed her mate. Then, none of this would have been happening. He should have just died with the rest of his clan, many moons ago. He should've let Wandernight rebuild JayClan.

Forcing himself to his paws, they took him down the familier path to the JayBranch. He lept up, calling the clan to him. "We have many cats that have prooved themselves worthy warriors, Scarletpaw, Hawkpaw, Gingerpaw, Smokepaw, S-" he stopped, Lightenedcall's kit. Did he deserve to become a warrior? He was surely just as twisted as his mother. Taking a breath, he continued "and... Shrewpaw step forward."

He looked to each of their mentors in turn "Do you believe these cats are ready to recieve their warrior names?"

The mentors nodded, and Fellstar prepared for the ceremonies.

He took a deep breath "I, Fellstar, Leader of JayClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down upon these apprentices. They have trained hard to learn the way of your noble cod,e and I condemn them as warriors to you in turn. Do you promise to follow the ways of the warrior code and defend the clan even at the cost of your life?"

"I do." the excited apprentices said in unison.

"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give your your warrior names!

Scarletpaw, you will be known as Scarletthorn, JayClan honors your wits.

Hawkpaw, you will be known as Hawksky, JayClan honors your strength.

Gingerpaw, you will be known as Gingerflight, JayClan honors your integrity.

Smokepaw, you will be known as Smokewing, JayClan honors your sense of honor.

Shrewpaw, you will be known as... Shrewfang, JayClan honors your... sharp senses."

He placed his muzzle atop the new warriors heads in turn. And the Clan shouted the new warriors names.

Fellstar smiled, and lept off the JayBranch, his head spinning with a mix of happiness and grief.

Sunday, July 17, 2011

The New Wonders

Ebonypaw yawned and stood up. Ivorypaw was sleeping right next to her. They had been apprentices for a few moons, and would be warriors soon. She nudged Ivorypaw awake.

"Come on. Let's go see Wandernight. She's getting her memory back more and more each day!"

Ivorypaw opened her eyes and looked into Ebonypaw's sightless blue eyes.

"Okay. Come on."

They padded quickly to the leader's den. They both stopped as they heard Fellstar coming out. He sniffed the air and nodded at his kits.

"Why don't you two go hunting. You can have an assessment. See how far you've come. You can check on Wandernight later."

They nodded in unison, and Fellstar flicked his tail for Bayfrost to come over.

"We'll give them a hunting assessment. Do you think Ivorypaw is ready?"

Bayfrost nodded.

"Ya. She's been doing really well."

Fellstar nodded.

"Okay. Let's go."

Fellstar padded out of the camp with his clan members following.