*IMPORTANT NOTE*

You cannot have your cat suspect what Lightenedcall is up to. Only Fellstar, Wandernight and their kits know her true nature, or her plan. All other cats may not be fond of her, but they cannot suspect that she is crazy, or framing Wandernight, or be worried about her sanity, all they think is that she is grieving for her lost kit, and that she is just another clanmate, nothing to be worried about.

Please do not make your cat assume otherwise, I know it is hard not to, but it is extremely important to the storyline, Thank-you
~-~Em~-~

Also, all comments that are like this ^^ shall be deleted.
:~~Dream:



Sunday, December 11, 2011

Striker

Striker finally got back to camp about moonhigh, and instantly regretted coming back at all. Ehel, of course, had to be guarding camp. Striker attempted to strut into camp, his head held high, but as soon as he came into Ehel's line of vision, the sleek white tom spat at him "Stupid brother. What were you doing out so late anyway?"

Striker shook his head "Nothing."

Ehel hissed and struck him on the head, claws unsheated "Don't lie to me, you were out seeing that she-cat. Fraternizing with Clan cats again." Ehel looked disgusted and Striker cringed "If you are going to take the position of healer, Like you were meant, you cannot be with those vile disgraces of cats."

Striker growled "She is NOT vile. She's not like the other cats."

Ehel hissed "Naive cat, all clan cats are the same. They killed Mae." Just the mention of Mae made Striker's heart heavy with grief "Don't even bring her into this!" Ehel ignored him
"Your lucky I don't tell Craw, he'd demote you. You'd never be healer!"
"Well maybe I don't WANT to be healer!" Striker spat, wincing as Ehel raised his paw to Strike him again, instead, Ehel's voice grew deadly calm "It was our mother's wish that you become healer, and I become leader. Now, understand this you will do as mother wished..."
Striker looked away, he was going to bring it up again
"Seeing as you were the one that killed her."


Striker woke in the morning, his fur ruffled by the wind. As he padded out of his little corner in camp, the usual hisses of "Loser!" and "Weakling!" greeted him, even Craw joined in, his amber eyes glinting as they usually did when Striker walked out.

Ehel glared at him, and Striker made his way toward Makahl, his ears pinned back. The old she-cat smiled at him, her tortoiseshell pelt was now lined with gray. Craw would soon banish her from camp and strand her on clan territory, and he would loose his only ally.

Makahl acted like she didn't realize her days were limited, but her voice was urgent when she talked to him "You have to know your herbs. You're soon going to be taking my place." her eyes were sad "Sooner than you think."

Striker narrowed his eyes, "Makahl?"

She shook her head "If I have taught you anything, its not to dwell on the Negatives boy. I will always be looking down on you,"

Striker looked away "How?"

Makahl winked "The clouds."

"Those big fluffy things in the sky?"

Makahl nodded "When a cat passes, their spirit become wispy, and white, it floats up to the sky, and stays there, so they can look down on the cats they love, in other words a cloud."

Striker felt close to tears "Makahl..."

Craw padded in, shoving Striker aside "Makahl-" he began

"Don't give me the speech, I know whats coming." she looked at Striker "Good luck healer. Look to the sky, if you are ever in need."

Striker watched as Craw led Makahl away, her head held high. There went his tutor. His ally. His one and only friend.

26 comments:

☪Dream said...

*Ebonypaw sat in the camp. Her heart felt heavy, and she seemed to be sinking farther into her sorrow.*

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Fellstar padded over to Ebonypaw "Do you think you and your sister are well enough to go on a patrol, with your mentors, of course."

~-~Fellstar~-~

☪Dream said...

*Ebonypaw stirred slightly.*

Hmmm? Oh. Uh sure.

*She got up, and shook her pelt slightly.*

When are we going to become warriors?

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Fellstar smiled "Soon Ebonypaw, you are making great strides in your fighting and hunting. Within the moon, I may say."

~-~Fellstar~-~

☪Dream said...

*Ebonypaw nodded slightly.*

I should've already became one.

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Fellstar sighed "I know. You will be. Soon."

~-~Fellstar~-~

☪Dream said...

I just... nevermind.

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Fellstar blinked "What? Ebonypaw... is something wrong?"

~-~Fellstar~-~

☪Dream said...

*She shook her head.*

No. Nothing. I'm fine

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Fellstar shook his head disbelievingly "Alright. Catch up with your patrol, they are right at the exit of camp."

~-~Fellstar~-~

☪Dream said...

I know where they are.

*Ebonypaw grumbled slightly and padded to the group.*

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Fellstar narrowed his eyes, but returned to organizing patrols.

~-~Fellstar~-~

Ivorypaw looked at her sister cautiously "You ready?"

~-~Ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

Ya. Sure.

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Ivorypaw hissed "Ebonypaw, try to act decent, people are going to suspect..."

~-~Ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

Suspect what!? They're only going to suspect that I'm upset over what happened to my leg. Nothing else.

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

"Sure" Ivorypaw rolled her eyes, Padding out of camp

~-~Ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

*Ebonypaw lashed her tail, and followed Ivorypaw.*

Thanks for being so caring. I appreciate it.

*Ebonypaw glared at Ivorypaw and walked faster*

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

"I tried to care but you didn't want any help." she hissed "There's not much more I can do!"

~-~Ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

You suggested revenge. He's dead. You tried to tell me he may not be. That's not really caring.

*Ebonypaw growled*

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

"No, I tried to give you hope. Tried to let you see the bright side, but YOU don't want to. You WANT to be miserable."

~-~ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

Why would I get my hopes up for nothing...?

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

"Better than living in pit of despair."

~-~Ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

I'd rather not get my hopes up on something that is useless.

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

"Fine then. I'm sorry." Ivorypaw huffed

~-~Ivorypaw~-~

☪Dream said...

*Ebonypaw rolled her eyes and grumbled*

:~~Ebonypaw:

EmberFlame said...

Ivorypaw hissed, but stiffened, a sent washed over her, and Lightenedcall joined them "Fellstar told me to join this patrol." she simpered

Bayfrost narrowed her eyes "Somehow... I highly doubt that."
She looked at Ivorypaw, who was stiff with fear "Leave."

Lightenedcall smiled "Oh, just because you can't see me, doesn't mean I'm not here." and she ran into the forest.

~-~Ivorypaw~-~